Directions Letter Background
TRENAK2 Basic English Professional Writing (Hopkins)
Department of Translation Studies, University of Tampere
Write a "social" letter to a friend from abroad who is coming to visit you
in Tampere. You will not be able to meet your friend on arrival, due to
an exam you must take (or some other reason). So, the letter
should give directions so s/he can proceed to your home in Tampere where
you will meet later. Have your friend walk or take public
transportation. Keep the following points in mind, and refer to the model directions letter and example letter [PDF]:
- Orientation. From point of entry in Tampere, make sure your
friend starts in the right direction: give reference points
for right, left, forwards & backwards. Summarize the method you are
proposing for him/her to get where he/she's going, and about how
long it will take (how far in blocks, kilometers, etc; plus how far
it normally takes in minutes or hours).
- Write your directions in short, clear segments, using street
names, numbers of blocks/street crossings, names of prominent
stores or other landmarks as a continuing orientation that he/she
is in the right place, doing the right thing.
- If there are Finnish expressions that might be useful (things
to be said to bus drivers, landladies, train attendants, etc.)
it may be useful to print these clearly on a separate piece of paper
that your friend can show the paper to the person.
- If using the bus, give instructions for finding the bus stops
(and distinctions between city and private bus stops) and how
to "stop" the bus. Also what door to enter and exit from, how
to pay the driver, whether anything needs to be said, etc. If the
bus trip is a long one (for example from Keskustori to Hervanta)
refer to some of the prominent landmarks which will be visible from
the bus along the way.
- Make sure your address is clearly given at least once, and
also telephone numbers, in case something goes wrong, so there
is a number at which you or a helper might be reached. If
there are any special people to whom your friend might turn
for help, if necessary, these should also be mentioned.
- In addition to the written directions, it is often useful to
enclose a printed tourist map, or sometimes a small handwritten map
on which you trace the route, or certain details of it. This is
particularly useful if your directions involve unusual turns,
short-cuts, etc.
- Use a variety of transitional words or phrases to connect your
directions, including then, next, after this, following this,
when you have done that, thereafter, finally, and so on.
- Conditional verb tenses are useful in letters such as these,
e.g. "After you cross the street, you should be at the corner
of Hämeenkatu and Rautatienkatu," or "when you look up, you
should see the train platform sign in front of you." It is
risky to say "you will see a large H&M sign just ahead"
a lot can change between the time you write the directions
and the time the person arrives to start using them.
- Remember that there are differences in directions terminology
between SBE and SAE. Use words your friend will understand
correctly! Examples include: sidewalk/pavement, underpass/subway,
block/crossing, apartment/flat, pedestrian crossing/zebra crossing,
second floor/first floor, bus/coach, etc.
- Remember also that English has different words for many instances
where the Finnish word "talo" might be used. In particular, distinguish
between "houses" and "buildings" (a "house" or "row house" or "terraced
house," but an "apartment building," "tall building," etc.).
- Avoid word repetitions such as "in front of you you should
see a tall block of flats" or "just ahead you will see two two
story buildings" and potentially confusing combinations of words like "you
should turn left right after the next crossing.'
- Double-check carefully in your final revision that your directions
are accurate: it is easy to get confused when writing different sequences
of "turn left, then turn right, and then left again," etc. Also, when
describing two or more different bus routes that would get the person to
the same final destination, make sure you have the correct bus number with
the route you have described.
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