Examples of Plagiarism vs Proper Citation
These notes on plagiarism vs proper citation are adapted from:
- Gibaldi,
Joseph. MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers. Fifth edition. New
York: Modern Language Association of America, 1999. 30-33.
The examples particularly illustrate the need to cite sources even when
one has paraphrased or condensed information from its wording in an
original source.
To use another person's ideas or expressions in your writing without
acknowledging the sources is to plagiarize. Plagiarism is intellectual
theft . . . Forms of plagiarism include the failure to give appropriate
acknowledgement when repeating another's wording or particularly apt
phrase, when paraphrasing another's argument, or when presenting
another's line of thinking. To guard against inadvertent plagiarism
[English Section "Type B"], make
and keep careful notes that distinguish between your own thoughts and the
material you have collected from other sources.
The words and thoughts of others may certainly be used in your research
papers, but the borrowed material must not seem to be your own work.
Suppose, for example, that you want to use the material in the following
passage, which appears on page 625 of an essay by Wendy Martin in the book
Columbia Literary History of the United States.
Some of Dickinson's most powerful poems express her firmly
held conviction that life cannot be fully comprehended without an
understanding of death.
If you write the following sentence without any documentation, you have
committed plagiarism:
Emily Dickinson strongly believed that we cannot
understand life fully unless we also comprehend death.
But if you cite your source the material may be used:
As Wendy Martin has suggested, Emily Dickinson strongly
believed that we cannot understand life unless we also comprehend death
(625).
The source is indicated, in accordance with MLA [modern, in-text] style,
by the name of the author and by a page reference in parentheses. The
name refers the reader to the corresponding entry in the works-cited list,
which appears at the end of the paper.
Martin, Wendy. "Emily Dickinson." Columbia Literary History of the United
States. Ed. Emory Elliott. New York: Columbia UP, 1988. 609-626.
Two more examples follow:
Original Source
Everyone uses the word language and everybody these days talks
about culture [. . .]. "Languaculture" is a reminder, I hope, of
the necessary connection between its two parts [...]. (Agar,
Michael. Language Shock: Understanding the Culture of
Conversation. New York: Morrow, 1994. 60.)
Plagiarism
At the intersection of language and culture lies a concept that we might
call "languaculture."
Original Source
Humanity faces a quantum leap forward. It faces the deepest social
upheaval and creative restructuring of all time. Without clearly
recognizing it, we are engaged in building a remarkable civilization from
the ground up. This is the meaning of the Third Wave.
Until now the human race has undergone two great waves of change, each
one largely obliterating earlier cultures or civilizations and replacing
them with ways of life inconceivable to those who came before. The First
Wave of change the agricultural revolution took thousands
of years to play itself out. The Second Wave the rise of
industrial civilization took a mere hundred years. Today history
is even more accelerative, and it is likely that the Third Wave will sweep
across history and complete itself in a few decades. (Toffler, Alvin.
The Third Wave. New York: Bantam, 1981. 10.)
Plagiarism
There have been two revolutionary periods of change in history: the
agricultural revolution and the industrial revolution. The agricultural
revolution determined the course of history for thousands of years; the
industrial civilization lasted about a century. We are now on the
threshold of a new period of revolutionary change, but this one may last
for only a few decades.
In the first example, the student borrowed a specific term
("languaculture") without acknowledgement; in the second example, the
student presented another's line of thinking without giving credit. The
students could have avoided the charge of plagiarism by rewording slightly
and inserting appropriate parenthetical [or other appropriate]
documentation.
At the intersection of language and culture lies a concept
that Michael Agar has called "languaculture" (60).
According to Alvin Toffler, there have been two revolutionary periods
of change in history: the agricultural revolution and the industrial
revolution. The agricultural revolution determined the course of history
for thousands of years; the industrial civilization lasted about a
century. We are now on the threshold of a new period of revolutionary
change, but this one may last for only a few decades (10).
In each revision, the author's name refers the reader to the full
description of the work in the Works Cited list at the end of the paper,
and the parenthetical documentation identifies the location of the
borrowed material in the work.
Agar, Michael. Language Shock: Understanding the Culture of Conversation.
New York: Morrow, 1994.
Toffler, Alvin. The Third Wave. New York: Bantam, 1981.
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